Ha ha! great this could actually be a real episode! Everyone is so in character! But one thing, Lassie calls Shawn just spencer, not mr. Spencer, Mr spencer seems a little too respectful.

I love the story so far, and think it's hysterical that Shawn asked Lassiter if he knew the hooker. I think you captured the characters wonderfully and I can't wait to read more!

Well your title certainly hooked me (r, it wasn't so lame in head). I'm curious and I'd love to know exactly what u have planned for this! What exactly might Shawn fail to see or find? I think it'll be great. Also, the characters r perfect and the Gus/Shawn banter is just wonderful. My only hope is that u don't get too caught up in the banter in favour of the storyline. Itdid seem to go on a little in some places but otherwise it was very good... And why don't u have more reviews I wonder?