 KeepSmilingItMakesPeopleWonder 2009-09-17 . chapter 1Wow...*rapidly flaps fan at herself* |
 snow 2009-07-14 . chapter 1 I love this so much. You always write them so wonderfully. :D |
 Wierdo-Lover 2009-07-08 . chapter 1aww this was so cute and sexy all at the same time.
Only you, wonderful! |
 Corinaofsewage 2009-07-06 . chapter 1This was wonderful, truly wonderful. Thank you for the breathtaking read!
Keep on writing! |
 JenovaJuice97 2009-07-06 . chapter 1I really liked this. All of the prompts were used perfectly. |
 Maelynne Naveen 2009-07-06 . chapter 1Yummie ^_^ That was really way too much fun - I loved Nanao's denial (as always) and the banter with Rangiku was hilarious <3 Wonderfully done! |
 lieutenant-taijiya 2009-07-06 . chapter 1I really liked it. I admire you for doing a one hour challange. I don't think I could have done it. I usually have to take a couple days and think about things. Wonderful job.
~Ticia |
 JapanLi 2009-07-06 . chapter 1Great job with this one. I hope you get re-inspired to work on some of your continuing stories! And I'd like to see where this version of their relationship goes, too!;) |
 Celira 2009-07-06 . chapter 1Quickly written? Still fantastic. Oh, Shunsui, you rake, you.
Here, have a quick beta, although I guess you might want to leave it in 1-hour-masterpiece form? Sorry if I nitpick, but it saves you the bother & usually I only do these review-betas for skilled writers who seldom skimp on quality. Besides, it's already pretty clean for such a fast write. Edits in parentheses--
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"Papers fluttered off the top of a nearby bookshelf carried by the breeze from the open window(;) it was another good idea gone astray." (clarification on -what- the good idea was, maybe?)
"Of course, throwing her box of peanut cookies on him (comma nixed) where they, inevitably..."
"Few people rarely paid attention" --> either "few people ever paid attention" or "people rarely paid attention", your choice.
"The busty blonde made a noncommittal sound in her throat and Nanao came closer(,) noting (that)..."
'“You’re so lucky, Nanao(;) he’s so attentive.”'
"The front gates latched closed behind her(,) pushing her..."
"No one appreciated a good work ethic anymore(,) she thought with a grumble."
"(The) sight of her front door..."
"(")Out of hand(") wasn’t the expression..."
"Who do (you) think I am-" she started indignantly..."
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Nitpicking aside, that was a delight. Always a pleasure to read your writing. *heart* |
 unevilgirl 2009-07-06 . chapter 1*giggle* that was fun! I could very well see Shunsui doing that |
 Eula Marie 2009-07-06 . chapter 1oh god
*fans self*
that was amazing. chirst, i loved it. i write this pair, but you...wow you've written them, so extremly well. I can't even explain it. i loved every part of it. it was like i could envision every thing happnening one day in the Seiretei, and it was so good.
spectecular work, the ending was...was so marvelous! that was fanatastic. ok, i'm gushing now, lol. but i loved it. you write both Nanao, and shunsui perfectly in character. so kudos!
I do have to ask though if you're continuing 100 Ways to Love. I love that fic, and i hope you continue it.
-eulamarie |
 WinterVines 2009-07-06 . chapter 1Wow. I can't write a fic in an hour. Impressive. I had a good laugh with it too. Wonderful. -WV |
 darkangel1910 2009-07-06 . chapter 1I was having an awful day but now you have made me smile...thank you. |
 Genasyz 2009-07-06 . chapter 1omg, it's been so long since I've read Shunsui Nanao fics! (sigh.) great work! :)
--Gen |
 pinoykengumi7 2009-07-06 . chapter 1asdf;klj :D I love it. The way you've portrayed the characters and their relationship is done very well, and good job with putting in all those prompts!
Thanks for the good read ^-^ |