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KeepSmilingItMakesPeopleWonder
2009-09-17 . chapter 1
Wow...*rapidly flaps fan at herself*
snow
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
I love this so much. You always write them so wonderfully. :D
Wierdo-Lover
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
aww this was so cute and sexy all at the same time.
Only you, wonderful!
Corinaofsewage
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
This was wonderful, truly wonderful. Thank you for the breathtaking read!

Keep on writing!
JenovaJuice97
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
I really liked this. All of the prompts were used perfectly.
Maelynne Naveen
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
Yummie ^_^ That was really way too much fun - I loved Nanao's denial (as always) and the banter with Rangiku was hilarious <3 Wonderfully done!
lieutenant-taijiya
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
I really liked it. I admire you for doing a one hour challange. I don't think I could have done it. I usually have to take a couple days and think about things. Wonderful job.

~Ticia
JapanLi
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
Great job with this one. I hope you get re-inspired to work on some of your continuing stories! And I'd like to see where this version of their relationship goes, too!;)
Celira
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
Quickly written? Still fantastic. Oh, Shunsui, you rake, you.

Here, have a quick beta, although I guess you might want to leave it in 1-hour-masterpiece form? Sorry if I nitpick, but it saves you the bother & usually I only do these review-betas for skilled writers who seldom skimp on quality. Besides, it's already pretty clean for such a fast write. Edits in parentheses--
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"Papers fluttered off the top of a nearby bookshelf carried by the breeze from the open window(;) it was another good idea gone astray." (clarification on -what- the good idea was, maybe?)

"Of course, throwing her box of peanut cookies on him (comma nixed) where they, inevitably..."

"Few people rarely paid attention" --> either "few people ever paid attention" or "people rarely paid attention", your choice.

"The busty blonde made a noncommittal sound in her throat and Nanao came closer(,) noting (that)..."

'“You’re so lucky, Nanao(;) he’s so attentive.”'

"The front gates latched closed behind her(,) pushing her..."

"No one appreciated a good work ethic anymore(,) she thought with a grumble."

"(The) sight of her front door..."

"(")Out of hand(") wasn’t the expression..."

"Who do (you) think I am-" she started indignantly..."

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Nitpicking aside, that was a delight. Always a pleasure to read your writing. *heart*
unevilgirl
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
*giggle* that was fun! I could very well see Shunsui doing that
Eula Marie
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
oh god

*fans self*

that was amazing. chirst, i loved it. i write this pair, but you...wow you've written them, so extremly well. I can't even explain it. i loved every part of it. it was like i could envision every thing happnening one day in the Seiretei, and it was so good.

spectecular work, the ending was...was so marvelous! that was fanatastic. ok, i'm gushing now, lol. but i loved it. you write both Nanao, and shunsui perfectly in character. so kudos!

I do have to ask though if you're continuing 100 Ways to Love. I love that fic, and i hope you continue it.

-eulamarie
WinterVines
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
Wow. I can't write a fic in an hour. Impressive. I had a good laugh with it too. Wonderful. -WV
darkangel1910
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
I was having an awful day but now you have made me smile...thank you.
Genasyz
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
omg, it's been so long since I've read Shunsui Nanao fics! (sigh.) great work! :)

--Gen
pinoykengumi7
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
asdf;klj :D I love it. The way you've portrayed the characters and their relationship is done very well, and good job with putting in all those prompts!

Thanks for the good read ^-^
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