hah
that was funny
intersting one-shot, yeah

A LITTLE DRUNK THERE ON THE SPELLING...BUT OTHERWISE GREAT F*IN JOB I LOVED IT

Awesome story.I loved the chat conversation between Kagome and Sesshoumaru.



KatiechanXoxoXSesshoukun

Either learn how to spell or get a damned beta, because your spelling and grammar are so bad that you can barely understand your writing.

I will admit it was hard to follow along with... but other then that it was good..

wow that was pretty good:) i wish their was more then 1 chapter!

Ok. First of all, did you even check your spelling? I saw so many spelling errors I almost died. D: you should reread this and correct it. I thought It went a bit to fast and I'm sorry if you see it as criticizing, but it's not. It's only my personal opinion and I thought you should know.



K_I_B

...okay, i'm not gonna lie. That made almost NO f**king sense at all. Just givin you a heads up.

And this would be rated M, not T. Anything with a lemon is M.

Up the rating and check your spelling.