OMFG I ROFL'd it was so goddamned funny. Cant wait fer the next installment

Oh my god, fix your spelling and grammar, this makes my face hurt. If you don't have time for a Beta reader or even a mere spell check, do not post until you have time. If you are old enough to write a dirty story, you are old enough to use good spelling and grammar. There is absolutely no excuse for this garbage.

The have online spell checkers, MS Works AND Word have spell checks. has a spell check. ANYTHING more advanced than wordpad and notepad ALL have spellcheckers. Use one, because this story is obviously complete crap just by looking at how it's written.

Ahahaha, Inu got what he deserved, great chappie XP
Jazzy xoxo /'.'\

wow inuyasha is **^^ plz update soon! lol charlie the unicorn thats funny^^

might want to change the rateing to M becouse of the lemon
dont want any pour kids geting contaminated