 horseygurl89 2009-10-11 . chapter 4this was a really cute story! i always wondered what happened to Lilo and Stitch after the movies. you did an excellent job portraying the characters. to me they were very cannon. |
 Awww 2009-07-11 . chapter 4 This story was so very sweet. Reading Stitch's reactions to Lilo's growing up, and growing UP, made me feel sorry for him. But it was great to see that really, Lilo will never outgrow Stitch, because they are really a couple and will remain together. And hey, the thought of Lilo as the new Grand Councilwoman was hilarious. The child evidently finally learned diplomacy! :-) |
 Ted 2009-07-07 . chapter 4 This is fun, though I'm not sure where you're going with this story. |
 Eclectic Me 2009-07-07 . chapter 4Oh, this story was terrific! I love the way it was written, in segments, and the way it jumped around with time, just keeping a general timeline, instead of just going in a straight line. And all the while, with the plot and the growing up, you still brought such affection and caring into it! And it was, in my opinion, quite realistic as well! And, I'm pretty sure there was another gushing point I wanted to make about it, but I can't think of it right now. Just that it was all wonderful! Oh, but there were some typing errors, but the story was still terrific! |
 D3athrav3n92 2009-07-06 . chapter 4Yay! You updated!!
That was soo cute. I always love your ficlets, they're always so good. :D
Keep writing!
-D3athrav3n92 |
 Alohilani 2009-07-06 . chapter 4That was an absolute joy to read. The characterization was perfect, the idea was unique and wonderful, and you manage to convey a feeling of genuine family- which this section needs but rarely gets. I loved it. It was a wonderful tale of growing-up, too. Just... all around great. It's so rich with detail.
I do notice a few spelling/punctuation errors, but nothing serious enough to detract from the enjoyment of the story. 4 1/2 stars, favorited, and I hope you one day grace this section once more. |
 Dancing Nightmare 2009-07-06 . chapter 4This was such a wonderful, heartwarming story. You have such a talent with words, and all the characterization is spot on. I see this as a very realistic take on Lilo growing up and all (or as realistic as a story with aliens and what not can be) and I enjoyed every bit of this. Lilo & Stitch fanfictions aren't what I usually read - even if it is one of my favorite movies - but I think I might start reading them now. I love how you portray Lilo becoming Grand Councilwoman, especially since almost all Lilo & Stitch franchise/series/movies have downplayed Lilo's role heavily. As you said, there's no development at all! (and what's up with the anime?!)
Anyway, all in all; great story, love it, keep up the good work~ |
 Miko-chan 2009-07-06 . chapter 4Made my day brighter as I read this. Unexpectedly pleasant, but I should not be surprised. XD
Aw, Lilo and Stitch~Makes me miss old Saturday afternoons watching the TV series. |
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