oh! fun story! I like it a lot! Are you going to be updating soon? Sure hope so!!

intense and now i'm wondering what is going to happen!! loved how you written ziva as being confused...it works really well..can't wait to read what happens next!!

loved it!! really liked how the guy was just able to walk out...it was neat!! and of course ziva hallucinating was nicely done to!! can't wait to see what happens next!!

that was an amazing chapter although not tottally with it you can so tell that Ziva know it was her father who set this up and her trust in Gibbs and ony is indeed also so true and so strong, she knows that they will always have her six

ok now I'm a bit confused at why she doesnt want to go back to them.
Anyway, I also wanna yell at her,
and I'm worried about her- that's good, ou have a captiviated reader.

please wright more, i luv youre story. and season seven donsnt come out for a while.

Good chapter.

I HOPE you aren't gone long!

But do have a good time!

I like it. Keep it going.

WOW! Fantastic story! I know it might seem sadistic, but i like how you had them cut off her finger. It gives it a more real feel. Alot off people do what I call fluffy torturer. Keep going. Well not with the torture, but with the story.

WOW that was beautiful keep it up Ziva is defintly a fighter

yes I liked it!
When did this guy suddenly get a name?
Anyway, I kinda wanna know more about what's going on inside her head, and maybe what's going on @ NCIS.

keep up the great work!

that was really heartbreaking! :(
i'm really glad i found this though!

Good chapter!

Alon is very smart!
I am glad he's Ziva's friend!

More soon please!

i like it