This is fntastic :)

Are you gonna write any more fringe storie cos i think you are a really good writer :)

Great story even though Season 1 is way over

This is great. Finally a good quality John and Olivia fic. Very well written. I love it. Thanks for writing this.

I just wanted you to know that THIS IS THE BEST STORY I'VE EVER READ. I agree with you John and Olivia are so sweet together. Oh yeah I also wanted you to know that your fic made me cry! I never did before and I never thought it could happen but the way you describe the scene and the way you run your sentences...whaoo ')

I loved this story! People always hate me for saying this, but i think that the Peter/Olivia relationship worked WAY better as a slightly disfunctional pseudo-sibling friendship. She and John had better chemistry. That scene at the end of The Transformation breaks my heart every time i watch it, especially when he says "I guess I just ran out of time. I know we can't be together, but maybe i won't know the difference."

SADDEST. SCENE. EVER.

But this story was a great representation of how their relationship would have started. Loved the bit where they sleep together after she's been shot - such a real turning point. Well done!

More please?

ps. check out my story, The Academy. It has a John/Liv romance too but there's still plenty of Peter in there!

great story !

olivia/john all the way!

thx for this :)

I also love John/Olivia. You did a great job fleshing out their story. Thanks for posting!

i love john and olivia !

thx

Aw, no reviews yet? I think that was great! I see your point about Olivia/Peter...not quite the blatant chemistry, but there's certainly something there. Nice job :)