Hahahaha! Loved it!

Adorable 3

Love how he eats the fry he was poking Watanuki with *heart*

He's totally in denial. x3

This was really cute! I like it how Doumeki says it out of no where, too, taking Watanuki by surprise. It's so like him! xD

"...or something in the back of Yuuko's shop he'd accidentally exposed himself to"

That made me laugh the most, for some reason or another. xD

Wow, I loved it! Very very in character. Watanuki NOT in denial is awesome and Doumeki's "Oi. I like you" is deffinitely him.

Just what I was looking for, really, great work.

O_o

First of all, great first line; really very eye-catching XD

Secondly, I must say I found Watanuki and Doumeki very in character; good job with them, and also with your writing - very simple, but just right (in its simplicity) and quite flowing.

And lastly, this needs a sequel. Please :D

Wonderful work :)

HEY! NO CURSING AT YOURSELF WHEN YOU WRITE STUFF LIKE THIS! This is a really nice little scene...one of the cuter love confessions between them...and ended pretty well too. *approves* LUFF!

Val

HA HA HA! That was good! I loved how Watanuki was NOT in denial and the "totally-not-kissable mouth", brilliant!

But why is Doumeki sitting back and watching his pray flee? It's not like him...

Anyways I hope there's more ;)

Haha this would so totally happen. So in-character.