puppy dog face. works everytime.

lol

this is really good please update soon and stephen is soo smexy it goes with the cuteness of conner :)

I really like this but I noticed that you caked Lester Jonathan instead of james

Love it update again soon. .

Oh please, keep writing it. I officially adore you)

wow, i am loving this story so far.

Brilliant length chapters and the characters are perfectly done. Please keep it coming :)

Absolutely fantastic. Total plot twist with whatever is going on with Stephen. I hope you update this story soon. It is absolutely wonderful

i am really enjoying this! hope to read more soon.

Please update this. its very good

very nice. can't wait to read more.

will you be continuing the story?

pretty please?

I really enjoy this and hope you will update again. Its so cute! I love how they both are so ridiculously jealous. Becker seems more touchy feeling than I was expecting but I like it. Please please post more! :D

Your characterization is great and but I did notice a few places where the tenses changed/typos. Nothing that a beta wouldn't fix if you are concerned about that sort of thing. Otherwise the story is fun and I can't wait to find out what is up with Stephen. :}

this story is so cute i'm loving the little war going on between danny and stephen for connor it's just so sweet :) please update this, it's really good :)

Very ver good story, so far...the very best Primeval slashy thang ive read, though i havent read many hehe. I likes though! I likes more than i like pop taarts, and i like pop tarts alot.

but i dont know who deserves to get conner...

this stories great, i love how shy and kind of innocent conner is, i can totally relate to that kind of 'hey...this is sorta creepily intimate and im blushing and hyperventalating like an idiot' thought as someone thats likes you takes advantage of your turned back or lent over possition! haha.

write more! i know you dont need someone pressureing you but there arnt many slashy conner stories and he's just so adorable and friendly. Perfect victom hahahaha.

I think you should add some stuff in conners perspective that tell us (the reader) how he feels and how he is reacting to the attention, who does he like best and is he gay bi or just wondering about his sexuality...does he think about either of them the same way?

Anywho! Very nice story, nice plot so me be happy happy little dancing hampster person.

Thankyou!

xxJakey

This is great! I hope that you are planning on continuing it as it is a fantastic read!