Hey, as for beginning - not a bad story. Maybe a bit rushed and rough on the corners :D

Also, you have posted it all on one day, and the chapters are extremely short. I would advise you to post it as one chapter, with "Z" ect. between the scenes. The waiting for loading the next chapter is highly irritating, even on fast Internet/computers.

Btw. Instead of review replay you posted a review at your on story (tsk). To replay look in your profile (Login->Inbox) or hit the link in notification e-mail. If you want you can also allow anonymous review (check the right box at Login->Account), so that people who aren't logged can post review.

I really enjoyed this story. ESPECIALLY that you didn't have Victoria have a hissy fit over who he turned out to be, or the fact she was fooled; it makes SENSE that he "fooled" her! She KNEW that he couldn't tell her who she was! I would love to hear WHY some (women) are so caught up in her anger! I don't think Diego would worry about her being angry! She is an intelligent woman! I strongly believe the reason she treated Diego the way she did was because she WAS attracted to him! She knew he had been very different before he went to Spain, and that is why she is so upset that he doesn't do anything! She is attracted to his kindness, his calm, quietness; and doen't want to be because she loves Zorro, so she takes it out on Diego in unkind ways. I wish I could explain better! She HAS TO realize from the beginning that the man under Zorro's mask wouldn't be able to let her see him at all!

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The storyline is a bit familiar, especially the first 2 chapters. I loved the third chapter, DeSoto and confessing isn't something you would see everyday ;-). I also liked teh personal conversations between Diego and Victoria, and that of Diego and Alejandro. Giving more depth to the characters. And you made Victoria figure it out on her own, usually she needs a sign in front of her to notice. The last chapter, I would have liked to see Diego stall it a bit, eventhough he decided to come clean, he's still afraid of Victoria's rejection. Having said all of this I would like to read more stories from you, can't ever have enough good writers here :-).