"The better to eat him with or however the damn story went." LOL! Best line ever XD

But really, I can SO see Shinji doing this. Lovely story, perfectly IC the whole time :D

Just one thing: LOL!

*lmao* Hilarious ff - I can totally picture Shinji telling Shirou-chan those things

Great it was a total pleasure to read this. And I can so imagine something like this to happen.

HA! Awesome! I love it! That is the best advice I've ever heard. Certainly way better than anything I've ever gotten.

Your writing style is cool and funny. And you make a great point about that particular group being one of the worst to send to the human world. I mean, Renji's tattoos? Ikkaku's baldness? Yumichika's eye decorations? Rangiku? Very undercover, guys.

Shinji is made of awesome.

Awesomesauce XD

I love the exchange between Shinji and Hitsu. Also the long lost Quincy lovechild thing :D

Going in my favs...

Yeah, Hitsugaya wasn't exactly handed the Dream Team. Shinji's little band could definitely give them a run for their money, though. Matsumoto, Renji and Ikkaku are totally, hilariously in character, and I'd like to thank you for that.

Awesome concept for a one-shot, and very nicely executed too. Now that you've gone and done it, I wonder why it never occurred to me that they might have met sometime, somewhere along the halls in the school.

go shinji!

I dont understadn O_o

I totally loved it though D

OMG OMG OMG. Forget about sage advice, let Shinji cut straight to the truth! Totally wasn't expecting that ending, but love it.

Hm... Homicide...

(Said in same tone of voice that Homer from Simpsons uses with the word "Donuts")

Haha... Nice work on this. Very cool.

Lovely advice, Shinji!

ROFL! I could just picture Shinji's face as he says those words! XD

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