Gosh, this was so amazing!! I loved it =]

my god, i love this one shot. i love all of your oneshots theyre so amazing :)

This was really overwhelming and emotional!
I loved it! :)

Best. Story. Ever.

WOW! this was an amazing story. It ended well and i loved the way you had shane change so subtly. I'm sad to know that it is just a one-shot, but can see why as the reason why. Thanks for the great story.

i really liked it. it was really sweet how he looked after mitchie. for a minute i thought shane was going to back down and tell mitchie about the account...

You write the most amazing stories! Ah! It's 3:50am here and I'm crying. Haha. This story was so amazing and I simply could not go to sleep without finishing it. It was truly wonderful and had so much emotion throughout all of it. I found myself practically thinking I was Mitchie and feeling angry, depressed and happy along with her. I love super long one-shots. You are a fantastic author, I can't wait to read more of your writing! :)

how the HELL do you do it?! Your writing is absolutely amazing! Every story that I read from you, has been absolutely gorgeous, a rewarding story from each...I can't really say page turn, but I guess scroll down. I love your stories. They are magnificent. Keep writing.

omg this is BY FAR the most amazing one-shot i've ever read in my entire life. it's amazing!! Aw shane and mitchie<3 this was great!

i know u said there wont be another chapter or sequal but... i loved it so much, i really really really really really want you to do a sequal, this story was awesome and i loved it all. i just want to know what happens after the roof... do they get married. YOU NEED TO HAVE A SEQUAL!

That was so AMAZING! Absolutely loved it! Every single bit of it!

I read another story just like this, I don't remember who wrote it, but it was about Shane & Mitchie, and Mitchie was some small company owner and blah blah blah...seems familiar.. But iloved it anyway!