Whaaaat! Don't stop there! Continue this story! I'll give you a cookie!

I'm not sure if you knew but there are only two sentences in the second chapter. I'm rather curious on how the rest of the story turns out so I hope you continue this. :D

I know that this story is pretty much dead (I read it a couple months ago) but, I just wanted to give my oppinion on it. Okay, here goes.

I really love the series, and I love all of the characters. The story would have to be longer to see if you have captured the personalities, but so far you're doing great. Well, anyways, that was my two cents. Please continue, or please tell us if you aren't going to.