cute!)i with a baby is an adorable image!p

Aw! So adorable!

Loved it so much! Especially the imagery in the last part when Evelyn came in and Jack singing. :)

Great job! Amazing writing, I didn't catch any spelling or grammar errors.

Oh, this is so sweet. Jack was my favorite character from that movie.

so cute!

loved it! though im sorta surprised he called bobby and bobby knew what to do! lol great story :D

Aw!

So cute!

xx

Awe thats just about the cutest thing i read involving Jackie!

Raine

OFFT SO CUTE.

I love how Bobby's advice worked. .

More Jack/Rosie escapades son? D

Hey I really liked this. I thought it was really cute. I didn't see any grammatical errors but I am tired at the moment and I suck at that stuff when tired. Also, I generally suck at grammer.

Anyway good job.

Oh, lol, this is so cute! I can totally picture Jack being stuck as a babysitter for some reason. He's definitely the brother I'd trust the most with a kid (except for Jerry, I guess, since he actually *has* kids, lol). The whole conversation with Bobby was hilarious, too, especially the "Hola baby" part. He probably *would* answer the phone that way.

Anyway, I thought this was really good. Cool fic idea. :)

lovely story. :) very original...

This is so epically cute! I adore it. This is one of those stories that would be cute in any context. You could have Victor Sweet doing the same thing Jack is and it would still be really adorable.

Don't worry about rewriting this! I didn't notice any grammar mistakes and I am crazy picky about them. So much so that if I am in a bad mood just seeing someone use "threw" instead of "through" will make me back out of a story. It's incredible that you wrote such a neatly written story without spell check! :)