Yes, Catholicward, you absolutely should.

Is it hot in here? You're goddamn right it is!

Great job, Kali! 3

oh my fucking god. i'm panting, i am. this was incredible! his need was so palpable and dude i really fucking love your writing! great job and best of luck in the contest!

Masturbating Catholicward pwns me. I hope he pwns this contest, too.

Umm, wow...yeah, that was, uhh..

*DEAD*

Nice. Hot and well-written, with a wonderful current of love and devotion running beneath the imagined action. And that last line - heh! Very in-character for Edward the way you've crafted him in OIW. Good job! :)

That was HAWT! Hopefully Edward will replay that over and over in his mind so he can keep it together when the time really comes. He's so cute, you just have to love him.

Nice! I know I just read about someone taking a shower, but I feel dirtier than when I started (in a good way!).