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MiraShio
2009-08-11 . chapter 1
Hiya! The Queen of Procrastination is back to leave a review... while procrastinating! xD

It took me a couple of times scanning over the drabble to realize what it truly meant. See, I had this first impression of the story's premise being that Soushi won a contest and dedicated it to Riiko, and then it dawned on me: It's a parallel of his relationship with Riiko once Night came into her life, and looking at it from a different perspective is almost as heartbreaking as the direct presentation. I commend you for such an awesome concept and such an awesome writing style. ^_^ Looking forward to more!

~(Mira-chan likeys Soushi/Riiko more. xD)~
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