Haha poor elizabethh, knowing that sebby & ciel were doing things behind her back D;

Well written, me likeyy (;

Steady fic idea. Good setting, although the English are Angelican

i like the story. it was well written...i dont think that sebastian is malphas though...but whatever good job

OMG I LOVE YOU!

Ahem. Lovely piece of work! Ciel's different titles confused me for a second. He's an earl but the man he was talking to was a duke, so isn't the man technically higher ranked than he?

Is Malphas truely Sebastian's real name? That's so awesome!

I like the different drabbly bits and how they fitted together. And your style is awesome. (Sorry, am not good at giving constructive criticism...) Also, I like how the religious references weren't obscure and your characterization of everyone. Elizabeth! I feel so terrible for her... (the vision of a cake covered Sebastian... O_O)

Thank you for writing

Nice one!

I absolutely loved the last part where you repeated a sentence from above.

really, really really Great.

Gosh, i dont know how to describe it. xD

love the way you write, plus it always increase my vocabulary.

haha! looking forward to more stories.

Thank You!

WOW.

I'm left in awe by reading such an amazing,well-written story. I pictured every word. I loved it!

aww, that almost made me cry at the end - when he suddenly realised, I suddenly realised - and then

you just end, i suppose... thats one way to put it. you remember your last memory and then you think no more, and you live till it ends in a place where you're really... dead.

but there are other, nicer thoughts that most prefer and i wont go into it... perhaps death is a new journey, perhaps it is a new life...

...gah, now i'm ranting...

mefleh. ANYWAY.

that was brilliant! i lurved it :3

again, never read the manga, never seen the anime, dont know (quite) what the characters look like, but i have mental pictures in my head... umm, ranting again, sorry XD

good work!