 Sundae Bunny 2010-01-05 . chapter 24Ayame's starting to realize she likes Ryuzaki :)
Poor her though, how embarassing...
thanks for the update though!
One question: what happened to the Wammy boys? I thought they were there?
Can't wait for the next chapter :) |
 DaAmazingMeepers 2010-01-04 . chapter 24What IS the deal with the "bone" thing anyway? I forgot to ask in my critique.>.< More soon please!=3 |
 ArtemisFowl'sGirl09 2010-01-03 . chapter 24wicked cool chapter :D |
 TheLoveOfAFriend 2010-01-02 . chapter 24"She gazed into his eyes, then regarded his nose, mouth…chest…abdomen…and lower… She felt that weird curling sensation replay in her gut." OMG! Who wouldn't?
It was more than expected :D
...bone? :S
Can't wait for THE NEXT CHAPTA!!
(I probably should drink some tranquilizer...) |
 yumeri 2009-12-31 . chapter 23 sorry i just wrote this review now i always got sidetrack with reading the other fanfic.. hehehe :P anyway...first of all the part were L and ayame in the toilet was hilarious, though in my part i kind of understand L's situation about being interrogated,2nd was about ayame being so emo since when did she suddenly swith to emo, i guess every character has there own story. i like it that you put len and hino in the story cause a also like those characters and their play i can imagine their faces seeing L in his usual zombie state. the part thing with alan m i dont even wanna know but i have a hunch and did L just gotten perverted ep! and to think i start to idolized his weirdness. AHH ROMANCE, guess i have to get used to it maybe i'll get some ideas about romance for my manga, frappe does keep on telling me i have love relationship problem so in short not interested in relationship. i cant believe you even measured my romance manga around 15% grr.. i'll give it a shot in making romantic manga |
 TheLoveOfAFriend 2009-12-16 . chapter 23Goodness, what a mess!! ~#@€¬*<@ I wanted them to KISS!!
WHAT THE F- IS YOUR DAMN PROBLEM, RYUUZAKI?? YOU SHOULD HAVE KISS HER! ARGH
*cough cough* I'm ok, I'm ok :P
You have to update this thing, you crazy maniac!
Can't wait for the update... ;) |
 I-am-A 2009-11-21 . chapter 23Soory!
I haven't reviewed in so long!
MAKE THEM KIS!
PLEASE! YOU KILLING ME SOFTLY!
But other than that, good story! |
 Sundae Bunny 2009-11-20 . chapter 23Is it Ryuzaki? If I'm right I get a cookie:P
Anyways, I really like this fic. It's so cheerful which is good since most DN fics tend to be depressing.
Heehee, I can't wait till Ayame and L end up together.
I also really like Light/Misa in this story. It's nice seeing what they'd be like if Light wasn't all Kira crazy.
Anyway, please update soon!:) |
 animegirl665 2009-11-07 . chapter 23XD no! he was about to kiss her
great chapter |
 animegirl665 2009-11-07 . chapter 21XD i did read everything in one day
XD matsuda XD |
 DaAmazingMeepers 2009-10-31 . chapter 23Good job. You caught a mistake I missed. I'm proud of you!^^ More soon please!=3 |
 ArtemisFowl'sGirl09 2009-10-29 . chapter 23great chapter! dayym i wanted them to kiss so badly TT_TT update soon! (p.s. is the incubus L?) (or maybe mello...) |
 DaAmazingMeepers 2009-10-26 . chapter 21Sorry I didn't review this chapter. I've been really busy this week, and by the time I got around to it, you had already posted it.=( Good job though. More soon please!=3 |
 SweetToothSleuth 2009-10-24 . chapter 19Ah~
I love this chapter to bits!
Heh, I'm a new reveiwer.
C;
But, yeah.I love your charries.
They're adorable.
and L is my obsession.
I absolutely adore your story~
I've now been inspired by your story to put up mine that I've been working on!
(yes, Its taken up most of the notebook paper I have.)
I loveloveloveloveloveloveloveloveloveloveloveloveloveLOVE your story.
<3
Please go check mine out once I have it up!
(In which will be VERY soon.)
Love you!
~Mandi |
 TheLoveOfAFriend 2009-10-23 . chapter 21Woho, goshes, this is so crazy!! xD
I wonder what could happen next...?
Love you, Joo!! Keep writing!! :D |