That was really good! Eomer is exactly how an older brother should be, watchful and protectful of his sister. It's not his fault Eowyn rode off to war and he couldn't have seen it coming. This was good, I enjoyed it.

Wow, this is really good, from impeccable grammar and spelling to a flawless portrayal of Eomer. Poor Eomer. It's kind of funny, even though it's desperate, when Eomer thinks that if Aragorn does not come soon, he will kill him with his bare hands.

This so captures Eomer's despair! I think you could continue it as Eowyn is healed and begins to fall for Faramir. it would be very interesting to see how you would write his thoughts then. Please write more soon.