I like this story, please update soon.

i love it.
udpate soon please!

-Luna Carter

Great chapter! Update soon!

It is really good, update soon.

yellow neon

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I can't wait for more. :D

great chapter! update soon!

*sorry I meant to write updated not reviewed

chew, chocolate, cheese, chess, chalice, cheer-as in how I'm cheering that you reviewed! :)

I think you should have alethia...Your character needs a friend..or she could be good friends with vanora :)

Oh very good
I really enjoyed reading this chapter
It could be a bit more flowing though as it seems to be jumping from one time to a bit on in the future
Just as a tip you can take it or leave it

I like Alethia's character, this has the potential to be really good! update soon!

great chapter! update soon!

i like this a lot so far! please update soon!

oh this seems interesting

love the story! Kind of reminds me of Mulan:) I love that movie! Update soon!

Grace