Wow amazing story Hollie

:'(

I LOVED it so much, this whole story has been brilliant :D

I love your new name as well ;)

Roll on your next stories!

Jess xx

Wow, amazing ending, perfectly rounded everything off. Andrea was a great character in the Bill, and I'd love to have seen something like this as a storyline. The final paragraph was brilliant especially.

Aw, I've loved this story so much!

I really liked the flashbacks, and the way you portrayed Andreas emotions was brilliant :D

I also like the fact that Callum was in it ;)

More stories soon?

Jess xx

OH MY GOD! GABRIEL BETTER BE DEAD!

What an amazing chapter! I loved it so much, and I think you've got the charcter of Gabriel down perfectly...but is that a good thing lol :P

I really loved it, and I can't wait to see how he doesn't survive...well he better not!

Love it! UD soon!

Jess xx

YES YOU ARE MEAN!

Gr! Just when things were going good and her and Gareth were patching their relationship up...you do this!

You better update soon, otherwise I'm setting Charlie on you!

Jess xx

p.s. I loved it ;)

OMG! This is so good!

I love all the flashbacks to the past, it really fills in all the information for us and Andrea.

The song is legendary ;)

Keep it up!

And kill Gabriel!

Jess xx

Oh good God! That chapter was amazing, the best one yet!

Now, this sickness, I reckon it's more than that, but it better not be a bun in the oven, cause that means its Gabriels, and thats wrong!

And now I'm starting to like Gareth, and even Hayley a little bit ;)

Really good writing, loved the flashbacks as well :D

Can't wait for the UD!

Jess xx

Really hate Gareth now. Brilliant chapter though Hollie - its great.

Keep it up, can't wait for more :D

Meg x

ARGH! Can I kill Gareth too? And his blonde bitch of a fiancee? Oh and Gabriel as well :D

This chapter was brilliant, I'm so glad she's remembering about Smithy and she knows that Gabriel was lying :) Can't wait for the next one!

Jess xx

i heart this !

Please UD soon ! I want to know how she got it :D

x

SHE'S REMEMBERING! YAY! All she needs to do now is realise that Gabriel is a tosser, and kill him :)

And she can't be mad at Cameron, he's too cute, and she can't be mad at Smithy cause he's her true love, but she can be mad at Gabriel cause he hurt her!

UD SON!

I loved this chapter, it keeps getting better :D

Jess xx

Brilliant chapter Hollie, I love it :D

Keep it up, can't wait for more.

Meg x

Aww Cameron is so sweet! I really like this. And I love your style of writing. It's so nice to read. Please UD soon !

x

Ooh I like Cameron's reappearance lol, even if Andrea can't remember who he is.

Great chapter Hollie, keep it up.

Can't wait for more; its brilliant :D

Meg x