But, uh... Asuming Nessie means Jacob, Nessie took Jacob from Leah. It's not her fault she was born, but still, she was the one who took him. Leah would just have been reclaiming them, like when you go to a lost & found.

NOOOOOO dont let anyone else continue they wont be able to do it justice you have to continue PLEASEEEEEEE? i will love you forever haha. Its amazing please update? xx

That was heartbreaking. amazing writing, though.

Wonderful twist at the end...! I loved all the subtle hints.

I LOVE this! It's probably one of my favourites. Honestly, I don't think you should turn it into a chaptered story- your one-shot's are better, but mostly, it's because it really just keeps you there in suspense. Honestly, a REALLY good one-shot!

Wow, I can't beleive I didn't notice this before. Geez, I'm slow. We'll I like it and really I should log in and do this but I forgot my password and is being a bitch to me. That and Musical Tunes are stuck in my head.

Lyrical Logic

i'll continue it! please?

Dang this is good and yet very schocking!, well oh snaps! nessie gone bad! :O

great story

OMG NESSIE, GTFO.

Aww so sad...

Damn!

'nuff said.

XOXO,

Summer T.

(ps. i loved it)

wow, that was... kinda kool kinda freaky. yah, i would offer to continue it but i have like 3 chaptered fics at the moment that haven't been updated for about a month XD.

Renesmee sucks, well that really does not shock me.

AH great story:)

Very nicely done.

I like. EVIL NESSIE! DIE! DIE! DIE!

Critic

Wow. That's horrible, and sad. Evil Nessie.