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BlueCat69 4/20/12 . chapter 4
So they chose simple, even though it seems nothing about it is simple, except maybe on the surface… and as it turned out, it certainly wasn’t.

“This," he said, placing his hand over my heart, "and this," he said, kissing my lips, "is everything. Simple.” It would seem so, but every misunderstanding in the book seemed to come between them at some point or other. It was actually amazing that Edward was able to take the first step and approach Jasper.

The epilogue extras were just frosting on a delicious cake. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story.
momkuttler 12/31/11 . chapter 2
Such a beautiful story. I've read it many times and always come back to it when I want a quick "simple" feel-good read! When Jasper cries "It was never simple..." it gets me every time!

Thanks,

Cyndee
solostintwilight 12/5/11 . chapter 4
mmm. buttercream...

I love kitchen times! so much fun to be had!

loved this!

thank you sweets!

MWAH!

steph
solostintwilight 12/5/11 . chapter 3
sigh... i just loved this story over on Twi'd and I think i read this when it was on the FFFA. but what a nice way to revisit! sigh...

just lovely!

thanks so much for writing this!

MWAH!

steph
maarit 11/24/11 . chapter 2
Absolutely beautiful!
dancingbarefoot 8/31/11 . chapter 1
Just found this; this story was mind blowing! Excellent work!
LLegs 8/11/11 . chapter 1
Just noticed I've been reading and forgetting to review! Really enjoyed this story. So well written. So much in a few chapters and none f it seemed forced or rushed. It all fit perfectly.
AnnaLund 7/2/11 . chapter 4
that was hotness, and sweetness in a just perfect mix.

thank you for writing!

anna
AnnaLund 7/2/11 . chapter 3
super sweet, I am loving these boys

thank you

anna
AnnaLund 7/2/11 . chapter 1
sweet, broken boys, off to see the next chapter, hope they manage to keep it simple, but with love. I don't know why, but I was convinced already from the onset that one of the two was Emmet, not Jasper. Have no idea why.

oh, all our imaginary friends. it would be so sad and lonely without them

thank you for writing

anna
harrytwifan 6/16/11 . chapter 4
I can't believe I missed your story in all of my E/J wanderings! It was recommended on a facebook page and I just finished it in one sitting. Amazing story! I loved every word of it. You did an incredible job allowing us to understand their minds, especially poor Edward's. Great job, great writing. Thank you.

Nancy
KM525 6/15/11 . chapter 4
This chapter was fucking hot! I loved the whole story. I kinda like it when these boys are just totaly dysfunctional but still find love.
sasharose11 5/18/11 . chapter 4
Great chapter. These boys are too much. Loved the end. Thanks for sharing this story.
sasharose11 5/18/11 . chapter 3
Love this, so very intimate. I'm amazed at how much Edward has changed.
sasharose11 5/18/11 . chapter 2
I feel like I'm repeating myself here, but I have to say again how beautiful this chapter is. Just seeing things from JPOV was heartwrenching and incredible. The epilogue really pulled at my heartstrings. I could read this over and over.
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