 wolfdefender01 2009-10-13 . chapter 1U...R...FUNNY! |
 LizzyBizzy123 2009-08-21 . chapter 1bad Luxa, bad. hahah that was pretty funny... :D |
 DimitriLoverForLife 2009-07-19 . chapter 1Dude! That was funny! I wish my cell would have servise there! Haha. |
 coyearth 2009-07-18 . chapter 1Very strange... XD
I think Gregor would have at least gotten a little mad, though. His family is poor, so I don't think his mom would automatically buy him a new one. |
 Lyoko498 2009-07-12 . chapter 1It was ok. But have the whole underland there and have them freak out. Then Luxa "kills" it with a guilitine |
 EbonyClaw 2009-07-08 . chapter 1that was funny. it wasn't that oc. you should do another, like with an iPod or something. either way this was fun to read
Eb |
 Nick410 2009-07-07 . chapter 1Good so far. The Underlanders tend to talk formally, For example, they wouldn't say "There's", but "there is" instead. Other than that, it's alright.
~Nick410 |
 Mad Reminant 2009-07-07 . chapter 1poor cell phone |