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Reviews for: What's This?
wolfdefender01
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
U...R...FUNNY!
LizzyBizzy123
2009-08-21 . chapter 1
bad Luxa, bad. hahah that was pretty funny... :D
DimitriLoverForLife
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
Dude! That was funny! I wish my cell would have servise there! Haha.
coyearth
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
Very strange... XD
I think Gregor would have at least gotten a little mad, though. His family is poor, so I don't think his mom would automatically buy him a new one.
Lyoko498
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
It was ok. But have the whole underland there and have them freak out. Then Luxa "kills" it with a guilitine
EbonyClaw
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
that was funny. it wasn't that oc. you should do another, like with an iPod or something. either way this was fun to read
Eb
Nick410
2009-07-07 . chapter 1
Good so far. The Underlanders tend to talk formally, For example, they wouldn't say "There's", but "there is" instead. Other than that, it's alright.
~Nick410
Mad Reminant
2009-07-07 . chapter 1
poor cell phone
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