 x-EliteAssassin-x 2009-07-11 . chapter 1I'm gonna guess the new style is the inability to write in paragraphs? It's not retro. It's retarded. You get educated for a reason ya know?
Their interaction very cute, and was the saving grace for this fic. But! Yuuri went on way too long about Wolfram being beautiful, it would have been better to have done that in small doses methinks.
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P.S. SARA IS STILL THE SEXIEST! XP |
 hearmelaugh 2009-07-07 . chapter 1totally didn't think you were such a romantic XD Aww, Yuuri's a great big wimpy wimp and Wolfram's full name is Wolfram Paranoid Von Bielefeld, any way you look at it! Quite cool that everything is described in short sentences, though it's not exactly... crack. I like the simplicity, though! And the redundant word-repetition, because I love using that myself '_'
'nyways, late review is late because we were PM-ing at 4 A.M my time, and I need t'sleep. Thanks for the dedication! |