YAY! Good stuff! Update soon!

Good story! :)

I am glad that you are not going to bring A/C together...I hate Cordelia and Spike...So, are you going to bring B/A together...

great chapter

I thought Cordelia was a little nicer by this time in Angel and not such a **, but I'm glad you made up for her issues.

The story is so good! Keep writing!

i don't believe that you should be fare to her. she was a stupid, selfish bitca that doesnt need to be justified. my opinion though.

bangel'stheonlywyatogo or,
Abby

It is alright to say anything bad about A/C. I never understood why A/C is. Sorry...rambling...I am hoping you will bring B/A together again which Joss costed us...LOL

I dont think you were being to harsh on cordy, when she was reciving visions in angel she never said about the ones of buffy in danger, doyle got vistions of buffy, so cordy must of had them. Im not fond of the cordy in the angel series coz of that and plus when they put AC together it made me sick.

sorry for going on
love this fic
BA forever

love this fic :) looking forward to the next chapter
BA forever

Okay, so Angel and Cordy need to break up. The end.

good so far, i am enjoying this. can't wait for the next chapter.

I have to agree with the previous reviewer about the characterizations and bringing Cordelia into the story when she was absent in canon, merely to use her as an out-of-character tool to add some conflict to the story.

Also, obviously you are a Buffy/Angel fan, and that's fine, but whether or not you believe that Buffy loved Spike, she had a relationship with him that meant something to her and she should be mourning him. Even if it's only as a friend. You mentioned him once in passing and completely disregarded the fact that he sacrificed himself to save the world.

Obviously it's your story and you can do whatever you want with it, but I think it would be a lot stronger with truer characterizations and more realistic handling of the situation.

I want to like this story--its mostly well written and an interesting idea. That being said, I HATE HATE HATE how you are writing Cordy. She is completely out of character from how she had grown in Angel. Like her or hate her, Cordy had crown into a champion in her own right--taking on serious pain and risking death, even becoming part demons to keep the visions and help Angel. Now you've turned her back into Buffy Season 1-3 Cordy, just to make her a plot device for a BA story. Weak. While Cordy would no doubt be somewhat jealous of Buffy being here, she'd also want to help her and her slayers because that is who she had become.

Also, the thing about Angel is that, while he's a vampire, he's also a good man, because of the soul. You're making it obvious that he'd run to Buffy and abandon the woman he'd seemed to be falling for before she went all Jasminy. And why isn't Buffy mourning Spike? He JUST died. You really need to take a step back and rethink your characterization here. Its just not working. Its easy enough for Angel AND Cordy to realize it won't work--too many things changed after Cordy went to the higher plane and the Jasmine issue.

Why not do that instead of making Cordy into something she's not anymore? There are plenty of characters to pair Cordy with. Xander has lost Anya, why can't they grow close and have them gravitate together and Buffy gravitate together. Instead you've taken this to the easy direction and turned Cordy into something she's not to make your story easier. I mean what's with the "eww Cordy" reaction of Willow and Faith? Willow and Cordy had started to become friends--as seen in several Angel episodes. And now she's all "eww Cordy"? I think not. This really needs some serious rethinking. Its too bad because your writing style is good and the idea is interesting. But, I hate character bash ficks (even of characters I don't really like). So if this doesn't shape up real quickly, I won't be reading anymore.

What is with the Angel/Cordy, crap! I thought this story was suppose to be Buffy/Angel. I'm sorry, Angel and Cordy kiss... yuck! Why is Angel even giving her the time of day?

Poor delusional Cordy actually thinking her and Angel are meant to be! i snort at this when everyone knows that BA is always and Cordy should be with Doyle, so you know what? KILL THE ** ALREADY!!