  neko 6/28/03 . chapter 2 thast it? u just stopped for two years? u can't u have to end it. LOL. Ah! |
 Ice Puppet 8/12/02 . chapter 2o.O;; o...k... |
| baraboshi 2/15/02 . chapter 2 yet another "vunderfal" ficcie written by you... 'cept this one you need to finish... or face my wrath... right? |
| Butterfly 2/9/02 . chapter 2 Need...next...chapter... |
| cbpatches2001 12/30/01 . chapter 2 Great fic! LOL! You should do more quotes! {Captain! |
| FanficReader2 12/30/01 . chapter 1 This is a good fic! I like the whole Star Trek thing, even if it was all inspired by watching National Lampoons Senior Trip, which features Danny Smith as Virus, an AV nerd. You have a Spongebob mention in the second chapter (The intersection/brainstem part) and you need to give them credit. My favorite part is the ERR! ERR! ERR! I love it; write more soon, you filthy Earth-monkey |
| Shinobi1 12/30/01 . chapter 2 Hmm... Interesting fic Tael. Different from your other ones, but different is GOOD. :o) You should make sure you seperate you put enough elipses (...) when you're leaving a thought open. You're fics still awesome though. Keep up the good stuff.
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