Aw, this was sweet. Thanks for sharing. :)

That Ending Sucked.

Odd, but really good! Sorry I'm just now finding your story, but I only joined fanfiction this year (possibly last year, I can't remember.). But anyway, I love JQ stories - I've read your 'The One and Only Jessie Bannon' (really good; update soon, please!), and there's another one called 'Cross Country Quest' that's also really good.

I have been reading your JQ fanfiction since 2000; I must say its one of the finest and well plotted piece of fiction of this universe.

Though i am a die hard J/J hr fan, i just can't help noticing the reality of this fiction.

I am confused as to why the certain deja vu occurs but its more to my lack of understanding what you wanted to say. I must say, i had read it first when i was 17 now reading it at 20 it has a different and more maturer appeal.

I just hope you finish that novel "the one and only Jessie Bannon", i just can't wait to know what happens there.

As far as this story goes, could you tell me what happened after the epilogue...

write some more!

I'm going to go in my room and cry after this review is sent. So, did the Guardians throw away the universe where everybody died, and start from scratch, or did they simply rewind existance itself, remove the Evil guy, and fast forward to the present where everything was ok? Please tell me that they didn't trash what went on this entire story, and just get some new supplies. I think that they did the rewind thing, only nobody remembers. I personally DO believe in alternate universes, and I sincerely hope that all this didn't take place in an alternate universe, Jessie, Jonny, and Hadji died, and the world began to end. I hope you can understand all of this unintelligible gibberish, but what I'm trying to say, is that I hope nobody died ultimately, because the guardians went into the past and Didn't. Screw. Up. You are the most profoundly touching writer that I've ever had the honor of reading ones works of. This is so depressing though. I just know that I'll never forget it. Ever. Everytime I hear Jonny Quest, I'll always remember this tale, and be sad. I'm sorry this is such a long review, but I've never been so overcome with emotion since my grandma died. I hope the fire in your soul never goes out.

-Jackie Bitner

please email me at . I think it would be a powerful thing to know you.

This was a really good story! I loved everything about it and was sad to see it end. Are you gonna write a sequel? You definitely should do that sometime!

That story was sooooooooooooooooo cool! I loved it! You gotta write a sequel! ;)