Wow! What a great story. I love it, its so unique and exciting! It reminds me of Mulan ;) But much more... how to say this, complex? Considering the complications in play. It was very brilliant that you astyle Haruhi as a princess, not only does it spin a Cinderella-esque (except it's the opposite, instead of a maid, a princess) By making Haruhi Royalty, you also can use politics concerning the gentry and nobility to give the story further intrigue.

In short, its really good so far and i am looking forward to reading what happens next. Thanks for all your hard work.

Well hurry up !

This is quite interesting. You have a great start! I'll be waiting for more. Please update soon! :D

Cheers.

One thing that excites readers and keeps them reading is a sense of mystery, of not knowing what is going to happen next. That said, spoilers as to how the story is going to end, IE certain characters are gay and will be pairing up with others later in the story does not make me want to continue reading.

If I already know how the story is going to end, why would I bother reading?

Nevada! A wonderful place. At least, I liked it when I used to live there

Hope your move was okay and I can't wait for your new update

Nice, very nice.I rather enjoyed it!Good job!

Love the story! Update soon!

I like this twist on the story, heh Princess Haruhi.

why aren't you updating? excellent story! Can't wait to see th story develop. Love the way you captured each character and the sexual tension without being too explicit.

Hikaru and Kaoru are talking like... Doesn't matter. Either way, Haruhi had better watch out. Update!

i like this story :)

but PLEASE dont make mori gay!

Your story is great and the idea of kyouya being a player is hilarious. I cant wait for an update! _

I like your story although it's a bit hard for me to understand, because I'm german in fact

But the bit of English we learn in school helps much ...

Looking forward to the next chapter!

update! pls! ah have to study for jap already! ack!

I love the fact that you incorporated the information on the past of Kyou-kun and Tama-chan. It makes understanding there relationship so much easier.

On another note, haha, poor Haruhi, doesn't even know that Kyouya is so into "him". And that is such a goodcliffe. I want to know so badly what Kyouya is going to do to her!

Update soon