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Orcatje
2009-08-03 . chapter 6
coowl, very nice way done;)
Selesteant
2009-08-02 . chapter 7
I would like to say that I really enjoyed this story, and you are a fab (fabulous) writer!

Can't wait for more song fics/ stories!! =)
d-christen
2009-08-01 . chapter 6
LOL Ron is so funny! I love how you made his character perfectly like he really is in the book! :)

You're an amazing writer and can't wait for the next chapter!
Selesteant
2009-07-22 . chapter 6
YEA!
very very cute ending!
Muttzrock
2009-07-22 . chapter 6
"BLOODY HELL SHE SAID YES!" Oh so Ron XD loved it and you know it :P
Muttzrock
2009-07-22 . chapter 5
Damn you I was supposed to be spending my time writing my own fic but I've been griped by yours :P I do love this it's really lovely to read :)
Muttzrock
2009-07-22 . chapter 4
*slaps Lavender* that bitch. Ron/Hermione 4eva
Muttzrock
2009-07-22 . chapter 3
*hugs Hermione* I really feel for her
Muttzrock
2009-07-22 . chapter 2
*warm fuzzy feelings* this did feel very Ronish, very good work on his POV. Ron and Hermione are so daft they really should get together like NOW!
Muttzrock
2009-07-22 . chapter 1
Aww poor Hermione, of course Ron loves you woman, for a smart girl she thinks silly things. Only criticisim you said Victor, do you mean Viktor Krum if so then it's Viktor not Victor but apart from that it's great and I'm just going to read the next chapter
merponiesrule13
2009-07-16 . chapter 5
aw! i love this story! it is so sweet! and chap 5 almost made me cry! ALMOST! not quite. :) love it tho!
Selesteant
2009-07-16 . chapter 5
omg once again, adorable!!

i like this part: "And he is look at me like I’ve always dreamed about"

Wait ur r gonna end it!
d-christen
2009-07-16 . chapter 4
Aw your really good! I absolutely adore it! :)

Keep up!
Selesteant
2009-07-13 . chapter 4
omg very pretty! =)

awesum job
Selesteant
2009-07-09 . chapter 3
very cute! I love the usage of descriptive words! =)
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