OMG! That was beautiful! I love the setting and I loved how you showed Bartz's good nature, there should seriously be more fanfics of him

Oh I agree! The lack of FFV fics is almost maddening, I mean I can't even remember when was the last time I read one. Anyway.

This was incredibly adorable and made my heart melt. Just the right amount of WAFF!dose needed before hopping happily into bed.

Thanks for writing this, and great job!

do you know that you just explain the bandage on boko's left leg in his artwork?

and about bartz can't speaks to chocobo but understand what boko says. kryle is the one who can speaks to animal, but bartz always got the credit.

and i agree with you. there's so few of ff5 fic. but it's because ff5 was underrate between 4 and 6.

don't rush things. i'm sure if there's quite a number of fic like this, fans of warrior of dawn will come to surface.