 Sour Candy 2009-08-14 . chapter 1Por Raven...I wish we could see Beast Boy's reaction when he wakes up. |
 CalliopeMused 2009-08-11 . chapter 1Completely cheating, you posted while I was on vacation! Normally I would've caught the author alert.
I never know where to begin with these stories. There was the brief mention of Jinx and Kori (and what a circle of friends!), the bittersweet images of the failed romance between Raven and BB, and the entire second chance between Raven and BB you tell in flashes--the porch, her wrist, the bedroom... "Medea" adds an entire other level to this story, for me, because it was a love story. A sad, horrible story about love that didn't work like it was supposed to.
Poor kids. It's never easy with the two of them, not when they're written half so well as this. (I still don't know where to start. I'd have to read it three more times (I've read it three already) to start picking out all the elements that make this so beautiful and sad and unified, and that just ruins the entire point of a good story for me.) |
 Rinnie Tuesday 2009-08-11 . chapter 1t was great. Really sad and it was real. =]
i liked that she walked away to save them. that was a great touch. |
 Jessy Dalton 2009-07-31 . chapter 1Loved it.
Loved it.
Loved it.
Loved it.
Loved it. |
 McGivafan0101 2009-07-21 . chapter 1:'( i love it |
 Wolvmbm 2009-07-16 . chapter 1You should continue on with this story as you ended in an interesting way. :(
I mean who knows what Beast boy's reaction would be if he were to recollect within the depths of his mind ? :(
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great idea like this one. ;) |
 Kevorkian 2009-07-16 . chapter 1Beautiful. I'm not sure what else to say. Very well done, no grammatical errors (that I spotted, at any rate), and the characters are believable (if somewhat OOC, but that's creativity for you). Fantastic idea and subsequent execution. I hope you find the time to write more often.
-K |
 jediblauvjr 2009-07-08 . chapter 1 My opinion of the story every thing until the end I think you should have BB and Raven forget about BB's new wife and just fall in love with BB. |
 hiya 2009-07-08 . chapter 1 More!! |
 bbissocute 2009-07-08 . chapter 1So sad...Wonderful job. Keep up the beautiful work.
bbissocute |
 RabulaTasa 2009-07-07 . chapter 1You know, I saw the title and immediately was on my guard. Medea was... not a particularly nice lady, to the best of my recollection. While I haven't heard the song after which this is named, Raven doesn't particularly fit the mythological Medea. She's seeking reconciliation, not vengeance, etc.
Title issues aside, the behavior seems very appropriate. I can see Raven turning him away and being gnawed away by the terrible trio of Jinx, Star, and guilt. Sadly enough, I can also see Garfield forgetting that he's married for long enough to make that particular mistake. At least Rae didn't let him remember, a considerable kindness on her part.
John |
 Sir Alwick 2009-07-07 . chapter 1Wow. That was heartbreaking, but really, really good. Very nice work. |
 6StringSamurai13 2009-07-07 . chapter 1Wow...this was awesome! I liked your more...realistic approach to their reunion if they had broken things off due to Raven being afraid of loving him. Most stories out there are WAY too mushy and things just work out too well. I liked how you wrote it and how the angst just permeates the ending :-D. I think if you were to write a sequel, to do it from Gar's POV and how he feels about having an affair with Raven. Keep up the good work! |