Wow that was awesome! I think this idea of a fight being like poetry is very like Shunsui, great job! :)

and I agree, HOW COULD YOU KUBO? They had barely done anything either. :(

I love it. :D. It's so nice and artistic and flowy and poetic. I just absolutely love the imagery you're painting with this. Wonderful piece. Thanks for sharing. :D

Oh I loved this! last weeks chapter left me speechless too. Now both our beloved captains are getting trashed in the forums for being week since they got one hit pwnd. They won't die. Tite Kubo always shows things in order of power from least to great. We've seen most of the captains BanKai, ichigo's Bankai and now the vizards are stepping up. Which means when Shusui and Juushiro recover from their blunder, their releases will be among the last we see. I think only Unohana, Old man Yama and Aizen will be greater. I'm betting Urahara is better than Juushiro, but not as good as Shunsui's release.

Anyway, it feels good to ramble about bleach to another human being that understands, lol.
I'm really looking forward to the next part of this fic! You are an excellent writer for these characters! :)