Jajajajajaja xD i just can't stop lauhing jajajaj and I really like the ending i just... I expect that Akane was goig to die or somethig like that but that she was on deliver... I never expect it! And like Ryoga I love the name Akemi y just lovely jaja repit love the story
Andre Saotome
P.D. sorry if a spell somethig bad, englis is not my first lenguage, but I know a little

really liked this. very well done.

more ranma and akane please!

oh^^ I liked it, I can't say I did or didn't expect the ending because I read the comments first to judge a story, and so a reviewer gave the ending away before I could read it. going in my favs. thxs.

Honestly, I was expecting the ending. It seems like that's almost a cliche now. Good story though. Love how the people continue fighting about who's son will marry Akemi.

I knew that she was pregnant. It just couldn't possibly be anything else.lol! Very cute, you should do a epilouge that's set at least five years into the future, and have Ryouga and Mousse's sons fighting over Akemi, it would be so cute!

Omigosh, I was not expecting that! It was so waffy though! I loved it! :3

Enjoyable. The ending was expected because of the way Nabiki made her announcement. 'Course this may be because my wife sent me off to work the day our first daughter was born, and I had a similar experience. It was well written, but some of the misspellings had me rolling: "roomer" for rumor, and "desterbing" for disturbing. Ya gotta use the spell checkers! And as for the "time slip," Cologne, for sure, probably didn't miss the "seven" and the others will put two and two together when they get a chance to think about it. That, for me is a bit of a faux pas. I see Ranma and Akane as a bit too shy to get into the "hot and heavy" before marriage. Heck! They're so shy, their wedding night will probably be hesitant.

But it was an enjoyable read.

Write Something Every Day

-JW

I think this is the best Ranma ending story I've read so far. I love how everyone was perfectly in character and no one was demonized or killed. The touch that Ranma and Akane were married after she got pregnant, but no one noticed was perfect. Great job.

To tell you the truth I didn't expect this kind of ending. While reading I was like, "Oh maybe Akane's just sick in bed or something.."
I love the ending. This is the kind of endings I love the most. [but I'd like them to have a son, then a daughter; a mini-Ranma and Akane] that'd be awesome.! I hoped this wasn't just a one shot though.

You're not the only one who notice the 'k'? xD. You're not the only one who wants his children to look like him xD. And yes i was expecting this ending. I like your ideas because they're like mine xD.

w0w!.,that was so not expected!.,
great job!.,
i hope to read more of your works!