Very nice. I like the way you write. Detailed, humorous, and easy to follow. Your choice of descriptive language is very nice too.
I also like the story itself. I think I might follow this one. I'm interested to see where it goes ^_^

when you will update

More!

Wow, that's great. Well it's late and my english is flying away so I'll make it short, but I just loved the "Nanny Ryuichi" part. That was brilliant. Now let's see how it turns out...

AIE, I LOVE THIS xD
ahh this is such a good plot, a great plan, ah you have to add another chapter please please please??
I <3 Tatusha
please update soon, this is addicting and you're writing wonderfully.

Woohoo! Great great story going on here!
Cant wait to see how it continues! =D
I'll be waiting for the next update!

OH.MY.**.GOD O_O IT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER THAT I READ IN MY LIFE! GOSH I CAN FORGIVE YOU FOR THE LONG WAIT, IT WAS SO FREAKING AWESOME *-*~ When Ryuichi entered the backstage and I understood what he was going to do, I was like ''OH MY HE'S GOING TO SING *-*'' and I started to hyperventilate xD and Ryuichi enjoying his revenge was PRICELESS xDD poor Tatsuha =P AND WHO THE HELL IS THIS FREAKING IDIOT WHO SHOOT RYUICHI?! I'm felling like beating the hell out of this bastard u.u GO TATS GO! ù_u can't wait for the next chapter *-* and I loved the thanks that you gave me in this chapter *-* I was my pleasure to help you xD I'm still searching for the other lyrics, but I only found Predilection, Sleepless Beauty and Shinning Collection as for Iceman lyrics so far ._. It's in momments like this that I would love to learn japanese u.u

AWesome. Update

I love your story and I found that I love this couple. Great story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I really can't believe that Ryuichi could be THIS immature!

This is a refreshing take on this pairing. I'm enjoying it very much. Nicely told story. Looking forward to more, when your muse decides to give you inspiration.

MORE MORE MORE!
My heart was beating really fast and I felt adrenaline running through my veins as the chapter ended. Ryu was starting to ** me off cuz he didn't know that Tatsuha was trying to save his life. Please, oh, please update soon!

OMG! o_o HURRY UP WITH THE CHAPTERS!(Chap.3) Hee~ This chapter was so intresting. Bad Ryuichi! Revenge is sweet but not worth getting killed for it.

~Mia~*~Cruz~

WOW, please update son

OMG! "Holy **," LMAO! Hahahahaha, I read the first chap. I loved that. This story is great so far! XD ^-^

~Mia~*~Cruz~