Ha ha! This was very interesting. And that was such a cool idea of yours to put you and your sisters in this story! The prologue/dialogue thing at the end was also nice. :)

I really like how each of the sisters resembles the trio of friends in Furuba--Tohru, (Shawna) Arisa, (you) and Saki. (Alyssa) And btw, I can't believe there's only 2 reviews on this! This deserves way more reviews. In my opinion. ;)

Anyway--the first part of the story confused me a little when you switched from 1st person to 3rd person. That's basically the only criticism I had.

I noticed some punctuation errors, especially with commas, but I think grammatically-based reviews are somewhat boring. So I'm not going to bore you any longer.

You have the makings of a great story! Please keep posting the developments of this story, and keep writing. Later. :D

This story is so... AWESOME! Loved it! Can't wait for the next chap.
-Love Nitrea ;);););););)

BETCH. Update this nao. Luff you.