so sweet :)

awe dat was so cute the first thing i m gonna do is go listen to that sng

It's irritating that you're actual story was practically word for word the song lyrics. I think you could have changed them more and made them longer most of the time. Or if you didn't want to do that you could have just written the lyrics seperately and people wouldn't have noticed.

Oh my ... That's SO CHESY ... But I still like it ... The song is also very cheesy and I can't listen to it a lot ... but sometimes, it's nice ... ;-)

THX

God bless you!

Thara