 The Mouse Avenger 2009-11-09 . chapter 6I don't know how to describe this story in any words other than...awesome! ^_^ I am loving this story to pieces (no pun intended), & I hope to read more of it soon! :D Keep up the good work! :)
Much love & admiration,
A fellow GMD fan (& fanfic-writer)
P.S.: I don't know how recently you changed the rating, but if it has to do with the last chapter, I don't think the references are explicit enough to garner that rating. I mean, to me, they appear very subtle, & actually rather candid enough to not be of a noticeable nature, although I suppose our opinions may differ...Just offering my view on the matter. |
 ViolaHarmony 2009-10-27 . chapter 6Great story, and very well written! I've become very absorbed in it. Please keep adding to it, I've just got to know what happens! :) I love the three little boys, especially Alexander and Simon. As a previous reviewer mentioned, the three sons each have a little of Basil in them, both physically and personality-wise. (I can see Olivia in them too.) And yet, each of them is very much an individual. Despite his gruffness, I can tell that Basil cares about his boys deep down. The parts where Basil gives the boys a bath and does a puzzle with them were very cute. Good job! |
 Deb Zorski 2009-08-02 . chapter 3LOVED Cliff's plan to extinguish the fire - a chip off the old block for sure...
a cute moment in how you inserted the photo from canon into Basil's memory box... and not only because it's one of my favorite moments from the movie. |
 Deb Zorski 2009-07-29 . chapter 2Happy to see you've continued on with this one - it's turning into a wonderful story.
Loving the boys... can clearly see the Basil in each of them (physically and personality-wise) but they all hold their own very nicely. And Cliff - what a firecracker... he better watch it before Basil uses his Daddy voice for real!
Very well done, and a fun read. Eager to see what will happen next! |
 The Mouse Avenger 2009-07-29 . chapter 2Great chapter! ^_^ I loved it! :D Can't wait to read more of the story! |
 The Mouse Avenger 2009-07-09 . chapter 1That was actually a very good story. :) I loved it! ^_^ |
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