I enjoyed this story. It was a little cracky, with Kirk and the Emissaries but I did enjoy his thoughts at the beginning of the story. I feel like you could have done more with Spock and McCoy, they almost seemed like a side story to Kirk. Maybe go over the development of their feelings more? Or made the story longer so we could see what happens next with the two? Anyways, the story made me laugh and I enjoyed the little bit of angst with McCoy, it offset the humor nicely.

Oh god, my eyes. Kirk a klingon and what I imagine to as an alien version of elastic man... I have no idea whether to be turned on or break out my brain bleach. Quite hilarious, actually.

I really liked it! and i think you wrote humor very successfully, made me laugh out loud =)

I really love this so far. I think you have kept very true to the characters! Your attempts at writing humour are wonderfully successfull!

Haha I like your story very much! It's quite funny, please continue it!

I smiled widely, but I didn't laugh, I don't know which one you were aiming for.
It was very good writing, I thought, just in general.
The only part that left me confused was the Klingon part- it didn't seem very Dr. McCoy, even if this IS slashfic.

I think this story would be at it's best if you actually left out the bits where Spock and Bones moan over each other. Their plain old bickering and Kirks lovely proposition (hilarious, by the way) are quite enough for a full, entertaining story.

The emissaries were brilliant.

Hiya -

I enjoyed it -- I found it found (literally laughed out loud a couple times) without being overly silly (and I'm a harsh judge of humor). I noticed a few British spellings (realise, behaviour) which is odd in fic written for a US show, but yes, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Bring on the McCoy/Spock slash. :-)
--Olivia

funny even if it was totally different from the norm. (Kirk and the two men, most only have one(Spock))

"And if the First Officer looked a little more excited, a little more happy that day, who would notice" lovely done!
really enjoyed this story; how about a follow up, an other chapter? that would be nice.

such a chapter demands a second one -at least-. thanks.