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SaphirAzure
2009-08-02 . chapter 1
loved how you wrote this! sasuke is a devil, huh?
Mrs Hatake Itachi
2009-07-21 . chapter 1
Uhoh, i got the feeling that they're both going to get kick out of the restaurant again!
Zenerific1
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
I'm not sure about it matching the song since I've never heard it. I though the story was cute, and sweet. Poor Sasuke unable to get time with Naruto because he's so busy. And I just loved the little fantasies! They were awesome! XD

I wouldn't mind seeing a second perhaps a third chapter going along the lines that Sasuke gets fed up with Naruto not finding time for him. Perhaps even rethinking that part about not having the wedding as long as Naruto find time for him...Ohh, you can even have Sasuke kidnap Naruto! EEK, how smexy would that be (Naruto not knowing who his partner is until the end!)
Okay thanks for the wonderful short and I'm off to read something else that you wrote. JA NE!
newsasunarulover
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
aww this was uber awesome .
5Angel
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
Bwaah! Oh my gosh I love it! Engagement, pending nuptials and an actively imaginative Teme!

You are just a big TEASE lol - wicked!

THANK YOU ...bows :)
woosh
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
haha, this was cute (and perverted XD)
although the way the story went surprised me,(except it probably shouldn't have from the quote). At the part when Sasuke thinks to himself that he would have to talk to Naruto over dinner, I was expecting him to talk super dirty, making Naruto horny and then leading on to a smut scene. Can't complain over the way it did turn out tho ;)
Unbelievably Believable
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
Very cute,very smutty!The things that go on in Sasuke's mind...Thanks so much for writing this!It would be kinda nice if you did a prequel to this too but it's okay if you don't.I'm happy with just one fic.
Billie Arm
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
Aww... I love it! I loved how you tied in the red wine. All in all it was great!
Thanks for writing it!!

Billie Arm
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