Oh my gosh, this is TOO hilarious for words! I absolutely love this story XD

Just a quick question, what book/movie/tv show/etc. was the spector and Demon rat from? Was the demon rat a reference from Inuyasha?

- Jewel

Edwards the middle child. The beefy moron, the Edward, then Jasper. It's their turn-days, since all five of the vamp kids are 17/18 whatevs...I'm not a Twilight fan, FYI, just a perfectionist (plus, I have to glean some pleasure from my mom loving such trash as that). Course, I could be wrong. I've only seen the movies, and half-heartedly at that. That Meyers shit is a total yawn fest and utterly predictable.

Oh. My. Gosh. Let me just tell you that I had no idea what I was getting into when I opened this story in my web browser. Little did I know that I would spending the next ten minutes trying to conceal near-hysterical laughter.

I don't particularly like the Twilight series, but I just had to know what this one would be like, and boy, I was not disappointed! This is hilariously funny! And the reference to Errol of HP? Priceless!

But those last four lines between Carlisle and Edward... I'm sorry, those just take the cake! I am totally bookmarking this story so that whenever I need a laugh, I can read this. Thank you so much for writing this!

LMAO! The end line was bloody histerical!

Every time I tried, all I got was an image of an ugly little creature pointing at me and laughing,

I almost fell out of my freaking chair! This thing is amazing!

HUAHUAHUAHUAHUA

Great! You should do more of this!

Bwahahahahahaha, that is hilarious! Great work on this!

Cheers!

redrose7856

Oh, I loved that bit about Carlisle's eating habits! And trying to guess where the other mentions of the supernatural were from. Where are the depressed spectre and the demon rat from?

Haven't even read Twilight, but this still amuses me very much. XD I like how you made a vague reference to Harry Potter. :-P Good job!

::laughs herself off her seat:: OH I Loved that! _ That was too cute and funny!

Bwahahaha! :)

good job.

Excellent! One of the more amusing stories I've read in awhile.

A very amusing oneshot, they blend well together :)

AHAHAHAHA.

nice harry potter references...

! Ha! I love it! Everything you write is golden, my dear! :D

To start, I love Labyrinth and I love Twilight, but when I saw the combination of the two I was, to say the least, skeptical. Then, curiosity kicked in and I thought, "Hey, just try it out." So I did.

I'm not sure how funny you intended this to be, but I found it beyond hilarious. You captured the characters perfectly, and, in all honesty, the end conversation between Carlisle and Edward totally made it for me. I couldn't stop laughing. Just imagining those two universes colliding is too great and comedic to ignore. Thumbs up.

You made my morning with this and I'd like to thank you for putting a smile on my face today.

Also, the whole Jareth/Sarah thing made it even better. I'm a sap for having them end up together. That's another thumbs up to you.

Overall. 100%, some cookies, a hug, and a pat on the back for making me laugh. :D

Labyrinth and Twilight is a match made in heaven when it's funny. Thanks again. :D