Can't really review because my teacher is being overtly paranoid about her lecture today. But I love the story. You got the characters down to a T.

Wow! That was good! Well done!

how old is the child?

nice story

I'm sorry I didn't have time to respond earlier, but I knew I just had to eventually. You are such a talented author. I really don't know what to say. I mean, everything was just absolutely perfect. You had Uryuu and Ryuuken perfectly in character. Also, the emotion you displayed in the story was so wonderful and had me, as a reader, feeling those emotions full force. I don't think I have ever read a story quite like this and you deserve all the flattery you can possibly get.

Aw..i wish this would actually happen in the anime..except for the part of Orihime dying..Great job though~