Perfectly understandable. And whoa, there are emotions flowing out of this.

Well, it actually got me teary-eyed. Great work, dear. Just like always. Also, you did great with the present tense.

Lavi and Kanda are just made for each other.

Also, the angsty yet somewhat sweet atmosphere fits perfectly.

Great work!

Woah haha, I'm late again. Anyway, scratch that, I'm very impressed with your increasing skills of wording you know. Now I really feel the need to bow my head. -bows-
Kro-sama! Lara-chan really has the right to call you that!

It was an impression that even I was a bit confused at first. But you dont have to explain things to me, or anyone, you know, everyone has their way of understanding, you've done a good job of bringing them just amazing fic, and a good puzzle for their minds, now its their job to find out what you wanted to give them.
I really appreciate that!

No, I don't think I quite understood it. 8D So you're very much allowed to explain it to me.

But still, as slightly confusing as it was, I still loved it. Another amazing veiw on their relationship. Some of it was very sweet and some of it had that slightly sad and... malicious? feeling to it. It's a nice balance and I really enjoyed it, as I always enjoy your writings. :3

Lovely.

OMG, I can't really imagine such a human-like Lavi xD I mean, it makes sense when I read it written in your pretty and colorful style, but my mind can't make it happen XD In my mind Lavi is always far more bookman than other people thinks him to be, and is always the one longing to be safe and take take and take until nothing is left oO This fanfic was so against what I usually think! hahahaha
I really love it! It was great to see the opposite point of view so well written and exposed... And you were cute and cheerful on the LaYu day, weren't you? XD The two fics I've read until now have a don't-worry-be-happy aura hahaha
BTW, it's the second time I think about Queen's songs while reading a fic of yours xD (8)What a wonderful world... This is the life for me! What a wonderful world... It's the simple life for me!! (8) Queen is my fav group xD Though the wonderful world line also made me think about the "And I think to myself... What a wonderful world..." sang by Louis Armstrong, who I also love! xD
Well, let's stop the silly thinking and go to the point! Quotes! (I LOVE QUOTING! YAY!)

"Kanda is a drama queen that likes to get personal and Rabi knows it's best."
Forget the 'stop the silly', I have to say this: I imagined you as a drag-queen when I read the line XD I hadn't gotten into the drama enough to stop the thought, sorry! XD

"“You know, love,” Rabi says before letting go of Kanda’s wrist."
There is something just too hot on Lavi saying 'love' with that teasing tone of his...

"“I don’t want any.” He leans in closer and let out with a grit to his teeth.
(...)
“I have no one else to give.”"
Simple but touching!

"Rabi is there, not for comfort but for the sake of his own personal fulfillment and he takes his time. Because no one has the will to make things right."
I liked this, though I don't know why XD

"He parts his lips and says, “I can’t possibly believe you.” Because he doesn’t see anything beyond the four-lettered word, love.
Rabi brings his all to the table. Like a cheap show for some sympathy and pity and perhaps some love if they feel up to it.
“My lies are white.”"
It sounded so bad-boy-like XD

'“I can’t give you anything.”'
Nice!

"He leans in close. Because he is not himself. He sees flowers, not stars, and lives today to die tomorrow. There is misery to this kind of life style but Rabi can never be one to point that out."
It's such a perfect description of what I think about Yu too! Though I have a more positive look at it XD I can't think someone so passionate as Yu to be miserable, I find him so much alive than he thinks he is.

'There is a soul in them and everything that Rabi offers surrounds them.'
Really, it's hard for me to notice that I like Lavi being the one offering XD

'“Only if you are.”
“I am.”'
Take that, Lavi, Yu is always right XD

'It is just that Rabi talks a lot.
And so, Kanda tells him he is full of shit.'
Oh, yes, I was missing the swearing XD

'Kanda says he is stupid.

Rabi says he is human.'
Well, both are too close to make a difference! hahaha

And that's it XD I think I understood, but if you want to try and explain yourself I'd like it too, for it's always nice to have a completely different view on them! :DD
XOXO! (yes, I'll end all my reviews with the xoxo today xD)

UMMUM NO I DON'T REALLY UNDERSTAND BUT I KNOW IT'S ONE OF THOSE SLIGHTLY ANGSTY ROMANCES, AND KANDA'S VERY INSECURE. Did i get that right? :D Sorry for not being able to fully grasp the concept. Dx

BUT I STILL LOVED THE LAST LINE EVEN THOUGH I DUNNO WHO'S DOING WHAT.

"He sits up and pulls him close."

LOVED IT MUCHLY. So pretty :'D

~nush