I wish they'd make this into a manga so that I could see what you described...it was super-awesome, especially the part where Raito confronts the crowd. =D

~Cupcake-chan

Well, it might have been short, but it was good. I especially liked the way Raito played the crowd like a piano, even his own father. It was masterful... like a Beethoven sonata. And I would have been wondering how Misa didn't run out of air too. Maybe her pores are able to breathe for her?

haha nice story.

ah! what a nice story! thank you, i enjoyed it very much.

I LOVED THIS STORY!
You are a wonderful writer!
HAPPY HOLIDAYS!

This was cute. I really liked it, and it's amazing for so short a story. Definately the best Raito becomes a shinigami story I've seen so far. Keep it up!

Hoping inspiration finds you well,
Emebr

Well, at least you finished. And it was good. I hope you write more some day.

oh. Please update soon!

OWO wow, this story is really cool! i just wanted to drop a review b/f the final chapter comes out... i loved it! XD

uh-oh. that was unexpected turn of events. But good. update soon!

Love it! Update soon =)

update soon.

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Whooaoozy! Might be incredibly OOC, but dang if I don't like it anyways! Keep up the good work!

I love a story where Misa's actually GOOD, they seem to be far too rare. This is absolutely y favorite out of all the good Misa stories I've read, and the humor definitely helps too! I really want to see what happens next, am dying in my chair of anticipation really. I hope that everything turns out okay though. I do love me a good twisty story though, like this one. All in all, this is defintiely an awesome story that I wish was just a little bit longer.