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thatswhatyouget5
2009-09-27 . chapter 10
please please please
hpfangurl12993
2009-08-30 . chapter 9
Aww. YAY! That was SO sweet! I can't wait for more!
chinocoop81
2009-08-23 . chapter 8
I hope your grandma is okay. I hope you're okay. I'm here if you need to talk. My grandma got sick last year at the beginning of the year and almost died. It was horrible, I felt horrible. The whole point of this is to tell you I know how it feels and I'm here if you need me.
hpfangurl12993
2009-08-23 . chapter 8
Aww. That was adorable. Hope your grandma is okay!
wordsxhandsxhearts
2009-08-21 . chapter 7
Oh, interesting chapter. The little dinner with the four of them was cute. I like their group interaction. Hopefully some more Ryan//Marissa interaction. Oh and Louise//Ryan as well. Moody Summer? Hmm...preggers maybee? IDK. But update son!
chinocoop81
2009-08-18 . chapter 7
cause she's preggars?
wordsxhandsxhearts
2009-08-12 . chapter 6
So my laptop died, and I haven't been coming on much, but I just saw the email notification thing. Loved the last two chapters! Ryan and Marissa are adorable. I like how they're sort of keeping their feelings hidden from one another. When he said she'd be a good mother I awwedd. I hate Hannah. Such a selfishh person. Made me gr. Can't wait to see what happens next!
hpfangurl12993
2009-08-10 . chapter 6
love it. more soon please.
sailaways
2009-08-10 . chapter 6
Gosh the angst! I love it. I do want to see Hannah come back once RM get together and Marissa feeling unsure of her position.
chinocoop81
2009-08-09 . chapter 6
I wish life was like a movie. It isn't but it would be nice. A happy movie, not a sad one. Sad movies are great and I love them, but I don't want life to be a sad movie. I want life to be a happy movie like It's a Wonderful Life or The Parent Trap.

Please make your story have a happy movie ending :)
Emerald Penguin
2009-08-03 . chapter 5
Im really enjoying this story and this last chapter was really good! Please update soon :)

EP
chinocoop81
2009-08-02 . chapter 5
The mom is a bit of a witch, except with the b instead of w.

I hope he called Marissa!
hpfangurl12993
2009-08-02 . chapter 5
I love this. And I know who he called! A certain blonde friend, pirhaps?? I love how he said she would be a good mom. And I hope we get more of an explanation of why Hannah isn't comming back to the US. I look forward to more chapters.
caleb66
2009-08-02 . chapter 4
This story has good potential. It's good to see someone with an affection for "notting hill". If you are a chick flick fan, I recommend "return to me".
chinocoop81
2009-07-28 . chapter 4
I don't know why, but I think this one is my favorite of yours. It's really original and I really like it. As always, post soon!
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