wow. i can't wait to see what will happen to Tracy

wait, did he go through time? or see the future? great chapter!

wow this was really good! you are great with updates!

wow you update quickly! this was really good. and the last chapter had a interesting ending (i wrote that here because i already left a review for it)
Can't wait for more!

this was a good chapter but why does it end like that? in a half formed sentence? not trying to me mean but...?

aw, it's hard to believe little Gabriel will become a serial killer!

this was really good!
I get my brother out of my room the same way Nathan does!

you know i could see those three becoming friends!

wow they all seem to have damaging pasts. line of the day:
"They never showed sympathy, empathy or any other kind of “athy” for his troubles."
that was good!

poor niki. :(

o wow

Whoa, this was a bit darker than I expected, but it came off well I suppose. I like how you stressed the trouble she has with processing Jessica's death, as that will probably play a major role in the development of her MP-disorder. She also seemed very human, very fragile. I like that. One of the things I liked about the series was how human these heroes were. You laid a solid base for the Niki-chapters with this one right here, so good job!

Fun chapter. Only, I would've liked it more if Mohinder had adressed his dad as 'father' like he always does in the series. That would've made a bit more sense, I think. Apart from that, you captured the enigma surround Chandra quite well, and his neutral relationship with Mohinder too.
Btw, thanks for the review reply, I like to hear writers talk about their stories :-)

Okay, first of all I wat to mentio nthe fat that you should put some kind of markers between your scene-transitions. That makes it a lot easier for the reader to fully understand it.
Apart from that, nice chapter. Although I would'e thought att to be a lot older than Knox, it's a nice idea that could just work, if you handle it well!
So, keep the chapters coming, you got me interested!

I liked the first chapter a lot better, to tel you the truth. This one was a bit confusing, because I am kind of unable to situate Gabriel's situation. That cold've been avoided had you metioned whether he was stillin Samson's care, or after Samson had sold him and killed his mother.
But it is interesting how he meets the Petrelli's as a kid. It's a bit conventional, but possible I suppose, as they lived in the same area. Nathan's a bit of an **, though (but tha's not a bad thing!)
So this chapter was quite good, but the first one was better.