Great! There's never enougu McGee-turns-Gibbs-or-worse stories, at least not that I found. Please continue

McGee got Gibbs-ed!

Gibbs-ified McGee Awesome

I am *so* glad you continued this! The premise has tremendous promise! I only wish...well, I wish that Gibbs and DiNozzo were to come back as well. I hope this doesn't just become a romance, or that romance becomes the focus of this. Nothing against romance, but there are so many other emotions and possibilites percolating underneath the surface.

I'm dying to hear more. Like, does Tim have his own team now?

Anyway, thank you for continuing this. I really enjoy this so far.

In some ways I would like to see what you do with it

Hinky is right, "A grief-stricken heart attack?" Ducky wouldn"t rally around Tim and Abby? But McGee going Gibbs is great. Keep going!! I still want to know how Ducky REALLY is, though...

I like your story so far and would love to see where you go with this. So-o update soon please!
Signed me,
EnneLee

wow this is intense! i'm so putting this on story alert.

Sounds like a great story. I really hope u keep it going

Hmm...I'm guessing that there's something 'hinky' about these deaths, but I'm not going to state it. Otherwise, I thought that the story was well-written. Job well done!

great start,more please

Too many unanswered questions for a one shot. Click on the help button in the Traffic tab for an explination. Visitors are important

Sounds intriguing.