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Reviews for: The Hierarchy
StarReader86
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
This story is sounding real good right now! Not too many stories on the Daria archive are dedicated to the Fashion Club, and the few that do are one-shots. I can't wait to see how this story develops.

You did a great job keeping the FC girls in character, while at the same time, giving Stacy a whole new look. Stacy, next to Quinn, is my favorite FC member and I loved how confident she became in the show's last season and the college movie. And I'm so glad you brought that same confidence back near the end of the chapter (take that Sandi!).

My only critique is your description of Quinn's feelings towards her sister's absence. While the Morgandoffer sisters didn't exactly become 'best friends forever' after the show's running, Quinn at least began to respect Daria more and felt less pressured to refer to her as her 'cousin or something' in front of the FC. But then again, without her sister around, Quinn wouldn't have to compete with Daria in the intellect department.

Other than that, I'm excited to read more of this story. Will Kevin Thompson and Lindy appear in this story, as well as other memorable characters? Please say yes!
respitechristopher
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
Wonderful. Is this going to be multi-chapter? Stacy's always been a favorite character of mine, and I do adore Stacy-centric fanfiction. Great start, and I'm looking forward to more!
Cyde
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
Yay, I like! :-)
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