Aww, this was really nice, I liked it a lot! :) You write Marian and Guy very well and true to the show. Kudos!
Will there perhaps be more? :)

I love the idea! (having just seen "Walkabout" for the first time the other day) You really should write it as a more detailed story -- I'd love to see the scene where Marian reveals to Guy that she's the Nightwatchman!

oh my gosh i loved it! so wish that had happend again saying how much i loved it

I can't really think of anything to say except that I am not suprised by how perfect this is and I LOVED IT. Yay Guy.

Sweet story...satisifes my desire to know what might have been if Marian gave Guy half a chance!

aw, what a lovley story! so wonderful.

Oh, that's so lovely that I could hope you'd made it into a multi-chapter saga! Really, poor Guy deserved your take after "Walkabout"!

this is a really good story i like how there's a different side to Guy and i think you should extend the story more.