This is boring.

I like the idea of a female 16 in the future timeline. I see that the pairing for this fic is 16/M. Trunks? That should be interesting! And aw, Chi-Chi is dead. :(

The only thing I really disagreed with was how Gohan wanted to be killed and that he ran - I don't really see Gohan as doing that. :/ But then again, this is an AU fic, so if that is how he is in this fic, then all right.

Otherwise, update soon! I'd like to see more. :)